E46Fanatics - View Single Post - FS [NSW] BMW 330i 2002 Alpine White $14,500 ono

Ballistic325 · 11-22-2012, 06:10 PM

Neat looking ride....

Some suggestions about your ad:
- talk it up a bit more e.g. updated wide screen NAV (do you have the latest software and maps?), genuine M-Sport wheels, excellent condition black leather interior....
- I see your brake discs are slotted, maybe say something about that?
- "Rare and much sought after Alpine White colour 330i sedan in immaculate condition"
- "All the features and comfort you expect from a BMW - genuine BMW widescreen NAV, bluetooth, electric memory seats, leather interior, sunroof..."

GLWS!

11-22-2012, 06:10 PM	#6
Ballistic325 Registered User Join Date: May 2009 Location: Sydney Posts: 2,096 My Ride: slow and steady View My Garage	Neat looking ride.... Some suggestions about your ad: - talk it up a bit more e.g. updated wide screen NAV (do you have the latest software and maps?), genuine M-Sport wheels, excellent condition black leather interior.... - I see your brake discs are slotted, maybe say something about that? - "Rare and much sought after Alpine White colour 330i sedan in immaculate condition" - "All the features and comfort you expect from a BMW - genuine BMW widescreen NAV, bluetooth, electric memory seats, leather interior, sunroof..." GLWS! __________________ I can help with * Reading Codes / Coding your car * R&R FCAs, Tie Rods, Sway links.... * RTABs Need an RTAB tool? Or clutch fan and water pump tools? PM me.